First review, please be gentle... and sorry for my mistakes, please reply them here or in my GB that i'll change
them when possible...
Ja ne
W~Wish tv Review
Story & Characters
The story is abaut to twins who have a mistery in their past...
Junno is a normal gye, a bit too protective about is twin sister Senna, he lives with her and they have a normal live...
ok, almost normal, they lost their parents in a car accident when they were litle and the only strange thigh is that
neither of them remembers anything before the accident.
They were living a normal live (ok almost normal, they have some problems at school because the teachers think that
it's bad for them to be living together in the same house with no adult by), until a girl entered their lives,
claiming that she is the true sister of Junna. The funny part is that Junna realy remembered her name,
Haruhi...
What happends when Junna tries to find out the past bewind their parents death? And why is not Senna in is foto album as his twin sister?
Junna now as to make a decision, a decision that will change the world... for better or to worse, Junna as to make a choise that he does not want, to save the world...
Rating:
Art
It's prety good sometimes with some mistakes in the figures but the graphics are really neat ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... Rating:8
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Sound
The openning is realy good, the music is cute and has some kind of rhythm. It has some mistakes too, not in the music but only in the translation of the oppening music, nothing to say at the rest ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ Rating:8
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Presentation
The presentation is really cute, and the mistery bewind the death of the twins parents is realy good, maybe because they keep the secretism almost until the end, and it may be confusing at first, but end is original....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... Rating: 9
Rating:
Final Verdict
8.3333 (good)
Reviewed by Yue-Horrishino, Feb 22, 2006
Comments
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Yue-Horrishino Feb 22, 2006
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Kiako Feb 22, 2006
well you should write more about the art because that what you wrote doesn't tell much.
and the part where he has to make a choise that he does not want isn't that right.
and well you could write a lot more since this is a review and it doesn't tell much.i'm just trying to be helpfull ^_^'
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crsg Feb 22, 2006
I think some more detail on art would be good especially.
Also, running the review through a spell-checker before you posted it would have been good. You can always edit it.
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shinorei Feb 23, 2006
You'd need a lot more practising on reviews. Not much info about art. All I know is that this manga/anime's arts are 'cute', 'good' and 'nice. Try to vary your words a little bit, be more detailled. ^_^
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Northy Feb 23, 2006
Please edit out the excessive amount of punctuation marks at the end of the art, sound and presentation entries. They're causing the entire review page to become distorted.
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fawna-chan Feb 24, 2006
I think that you need to um, take out the periods and stuff that you used at the end of every sentence. I think that you should use a bit more description to each of the parts like the art and sound. keep trying.
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angelxxuan Banned Member May 23, 2012
sort of slim review, too many dots. could use a lot of improvements, not really much I can add here since the review left a lot open to be explored which was not :(
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