Holy smuthers , I've never thought anyone would review this.
Personally , this series caught my attention because I've heard the company which created it stamped out the fan
group who were trying to translate the Visual Novel of this franchise and I've watched it myself but... well ,
let's just say I'm not fond of it as an Anime but have keen interest in it as a Visual Novel.
Well , moving on , Artwork and Sound reviews aren't my forte , so I'll leave it at that , but for the storyline , I know that I too , gives a general idea on what an Anime is like in the review but it is also nice to give some personal thoughts on the plot structure and the fortifude it possess , as well as the strength of character and stuff like that in the reviews.
As for some of the things you said in the Presentation , such as the linearity of the storyline and the dumbness of
every girl falling for Haruka , it would do better in the story side of the review.
The Anime is also just an Ecchi Anime as well , Hentai is in itself something else entire , "soft-core" or not
, so it's probably best to get the genre right.
It is also fairly contradictory to state that the "plot seems somewhat predictable and linear" when you state that it has a good plotline , so it's best if you continue on explaining on that point to prevent confusion in some of the more avid readers.
Either way , generally speaking , I am rather fond in some of the details you have brought out in the Presentation board and how unrestrained you are in bringing out the more embarassing pointers in the Anime without much hestitation. :3